Editing as I Write: How and Why 

A commonly-shared writing tip is “don’t edit as you write.” I understand this advice, and for the novice writer who is trying to finish their first short story or novel, I believe it’s good advice. 

The idea is that you finish a project before you start to polish the project. Actually finishing can be tough (for both the novice and the seasoned writer), and saying “don’t edit till you’ve finished the story” is meant to keep the writer on track. This advice advocates moving forward to the point of writing “The End,” rather than spending time and mental energy on polishing the perfect first page and leaving a story incomplete. 

So yes, “don’t edit as you write” can be good advice for certain people in certain circumstances. But like a lot of writing advice, it’s not a one-size-fits-all sort of thing. I edit as I write; in my early days of writing, I quickly learned that the “just keep writing and edit later” thing wasn’t going to work for me. 

Why I Edit as I Write 

I self-edit, revise, delete, and make all sorts of changes while still writing my first draft because, quite frankly, I can’t think straight if I don’t. As I write, new ideas come to me as the plot, characters, and story world develop. (Yes, I outline before I write – sometimes in great detail. But even so, the act of writing generates new possibilities that have to be handled on the fly). 

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World-Building Tips: Creating a Magic System – Part 2

In my previous blog post, I went over some simple world-building tips for anyone writing fantasy who is creating a magic system for their world. No matter how unique you want to make your fictional world, things within the story should follow the rules of the world you’ve built. This creates consistency and helps build trust with the reader; this makes your story more believable, no matter how fantastical some elements may be. 

There are a few more basic concepts that I think can help writers to build the structure of magic within their fantasy world. Answering these questions can help you think more deeply about how you want magic to work in your story. 

Societal View of Magic 

How does the society of your world view magic? Is it just an everyday thing, or reserved for special people or special occasions? Is it viewed positively or negatively, or kept a secret? A society that casts spells with the same casualness and frequency that we check our smart phones would be very different from a society that hunts down magic users and puts them in prison. The cultural ideals regarding magic should be a huge element in your worldbuilding. 

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World Building Tips: Creating a Magic System – Part 1

For the next couple of posts, I’m going to discuss some simple world-building tips for anyone writing fantasy who is creating a magic system for their world. No matter how unique you want to make your fictional world, things within the story should follow the rules of the world you’ve built. This creates consistency and helps build trust with the reader; this makes your story more believable, no matter how fantastical some elements may be.

There are a few basic concepts that I think can help writers to build the structure of magic within their fantasy world. Answering these questions can help you think more deeply about how you want magic to work in your story.

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Tips for Naming Your Characters

Choosing names for your characters is an important, and sometimes challenging, process. There are many different ways that writers have of choosing character names. Sometimes an author has a favorite naming method, and sometimes the story itself determines the types of names (and ways of choosing them). Here are a few suggestions for picking the perfect character names for your next story: 

Meaning 

Many authors like to choose character names that mean something—whether that meaning is addressed in the story or not. Many baby name websites have name meanings, but one of the most comprehensive name meaning sites is Behind the Name

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POV Pros and Cons

I’ve seen many beginning writers ask “what point of view should my story be told in?” I believe there’s no right or wrong answer to this, and certainly no one-size-fits-all answer. Many writers will start writing in third person, realize the story just isn’t working, and switch to first person, and then everything flows (or start out in first and switch to third, or some other combination). At any rate, the story itself should be the thing that tells you whether to write in first person, third person, one point of view, many, or some other arrangement. 

If you’re struggling with POV (Point Of View), here’s a quick guide that maybe can help you figure out what’s best for you and your story: 

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